There have been alarming statistics regarding the surge in the amount of offenses committed by young people, especially in the urban areas around the world. There are numerous reasons behind the youth committing illegal acts; however, certain measures can be implemented to tackle the issue. Both the observed causes along with along the relevant solutions are elaborated further.
Discussing the several causes behind increasing youth crimes, but the most effective cause is that violence in movies which is the main attraction for young brains. Since sometimes youngsters do commit crime as an adventure by getting inspiration from movies. Apart from this, video games are also equally responsible where teenagers involved in crime. As, in video games, fighting and the use of weapons are frequently showed and it influences youngsters to do the same thing in real life which is quite harmful. Furthermore, the rate of unemployment is another reason which compels people to commit crimes like robbery, pick-pocket, and snatching.
However, several steps can be taken to reduce delinquency. First, the public and governments should work together. Families always spend some time together and talk to each other, especially with children. Moreover, governments should try to create as many as job opportunities they can to fulfill the requirements of a growing youth population looking for a job. Last but not least, when youngster commits a crime, the judicial system should look into the all the aspect of that crime and the accused and give punishments that will help them to come out of such situations. Giving hard punishments to such cases will result in more harm than good.
In conclusion, violence in movies, projection of crime in video games and unemployment are major reasons for increasing criminal activities in society. Therefore, both the society and government have an equal responsibility to deal with this issue effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38235294118 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81160677217 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643790849673 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9297664069 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186071585166 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492204713568 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439733306328 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105195047635 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305568707327 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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