For any person it is obvious that travelling to a new country without knowing its language is a nervous event, but living in such a place is several times harder. I personally agree that this situation can produce some social and practical problems and harm the psychological health of the person, who lives in a foreign nation.
The first problem to occur is an absence of friends or any social life. At homeland there are people, who support a person in challenging times privately with conversation and gestures of care, e.g. hugs. But moving to another country deprives an immigrant of this personal communication and gives a feeling of loneliness. The latter can be the one of the most popular causes of depression and other mental illnesses.
The second issue is an inability to interact with such people as a cashier, a policeman, a doctor, and many others. It can affect not only safety and health, but also a quality of everyday life. For example, a misunderstanding of a taxi driver can lead to a wrong destination or a wrong interpretation of symptoms by a therapist provides an inappropriate treatment.
In conclusion, immigrants without knowing the language of the foreign country they live in become excluded by others from the socium for this inability to speak freely. Therefore the practical issues appear in addition to the social ones. I truly believe that this problem of socializing produces a barrier that prevents learning a new language, ultimately leading to a vicious circle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ium for this inability to speak freely. Therefore the practical issues appear in addition...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01992031873 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96245078691 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597609561753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3105399169 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258838465555 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835403730619 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661480460247 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152111396363 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801395518025 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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