Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The distinctive problem associated with living abroad is to speak another language. Many people believe speaking a different language causes increasingly widened gap and obstacles for persons or youngsters in their environment. Opponents argue that taking the foreign language does not cause a trouble because people there understand the situation like that. In my opinion, I totally agree with this assessment and I will introduce evidence supporting that.
First of all, some people believe that speaking another language brings about numerous issues such as misunderstanding the surrounded world which might cause inevitable dangerous matters and might put them in embarrassed situations as well as unacceptable effects on your job or study. Moreover, if he or she does the assigned tasks with huge mistakes in their work because of miscommunication. For example, a study has been conducted in one of the developed countries illustrated 50% of expat students suffering from not fully understanding their courses which eventually /affect their marks.
The opponents to this opinion argue that talking a foreign language can not impact on your situation because people in that country estimate the case of expatriate and might help them learn and acquire the skills for adaptation. For instance, a TV program in BBC channel called adaptation showed most of the expats from under developed countries work and study in British without noticeable problems.
To sum up, numerous youngsters in our society believe talking foreign language might create stumbling blocks because of the misconception for the original people in a work or a college. Others argue that there are no justifications to think about that because humans have key feature named adaptation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t speaking another language brings about numerous issues such as misunderstanding...
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...understanding the surrounded world which might cause inevitable dangerous matters...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50367647059 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94144989538 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2499956411 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.090909091 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142299905368 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525799440012 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281336967751 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857489876575 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315625826598 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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