Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Every country has own language. The arrangements as moving to another country lead to use for speaking not a native language. Some people state that talking by not a native language, resulting in many problems such as social and practical. However, I completely disagree with this idea; because each language can be learnt with some effort.
There is no doubt that the first problem is the foreign language barrier of the immigrants in the foreign land. These people face some difficulties in the beginning because they don‘t speak the native language of this country. The key problems would be much paperwork to get a residence permit, searching for a job and even going shopping or making new friends. it could be a huge challenge for people in the first few weeks. However, in my opinion, none of these difficulties causes any serious issues because any language can be learnt after for a while
Moreover, by using the universal language of the world like English, it could help you survive the first weeks in the abroad. this language is the main work language in the many fields as science, programming and economic. For instance, last summer I worked at a science institute in Sweden and the language of the work had been English. I did not speak Swedish and did not feel any difficulties trying to manage my living in this country. English helped me to survive in Sweden. At least in the countries: China and Russia, where English is not widespread, you can find people who know the basic words of this language.
In conclusion, many people believe that having a talk in a foreign language can cause many problems. In my opinion, each a foreign language can be learned and immigrants can adapt to the new environment within a few weeks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83443708609 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60639569896 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516556291391 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6180505959 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252282558207 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779602266774 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564993361351 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150963040279 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029179370025 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.