Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is considered that we could face obstacles both socially and practically while staying in a foreign country where we should learn a local language to communicate. I completely agree with the idea above.

At first, without learning a local language, it is likely to be difficult to involve deeply in the local community. For example, when I stayed in Bosnia and Herzegovina, I had several local friends since I understood the language they use. When we hung out, they introduced me the places where only locals know. Without these friends, I would have never visited these places and also missed local cultural activities which is not in the tour guide book without them. On the other hands, my friend who was also from a foreign country and did not study any local language spent most of the time alone at home. She regretted not taking a language course earlier.

Secondly, it is obvious that we would be in trouble for living in the country without learning a local language. when we use a public transportation, buy some food, find an accommodation, and even ask the direction, we should know the language which is used in the country where we are. Of course, it could be possible to use a sign language or a drawing, however, there must be a limitation to understand each other with them. Therefore it is highly recommended obtaining at least a survival language skill before going abroad. Though it sometimes seems that the people who speaks English can stay wherever they want, it is said that we could spend a fruitful period of staying with understanding a local language.

In conclusion, speaking a foreign language is critical for staying abroad for a daily life and a socialization as well.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...ood the language they use. When we hung out, they introduced me the places where on...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ntry without learning a local language. when we use a public transportation, buy som...
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Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ion to understand each other with them. Therefore it is highly recommended obtaining at l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, of course, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85034013605 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73732401358 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5637576982 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144347505596 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055645517737 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397642780151 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114404423715 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419996046061 0.056905535591 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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