Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are certain elements in developing human interactions. While the most efficient way to develop this relationship throughout conversations with others. As a result, it seems like social problems will be occurred by foreigner staying in a totally unfamiliar language area. But actually, in my opinion, i considered that the language level only has a small effort on a perfect communication. To this extent, I disagree with this statement that people staying in a foreign language country can lead to practical problems.
Language barrier might be the major problem for a foreigner in communication. While having a conversation, non-native language people need to concern the positive speaking, in order to express their own opinion. Following this process might really take time, which owes to increase the brain disposal ability to combined the internal ideas in a different language version. This situation produced a dead silence, lead to a communication become bad to worse.
Nevertheless, most of the people believed this matter is totally involved by self-consideration. Generally, being patient on listening, expressing ideas directly always come first in perfect communication. Literally, while facing a conversation with regions, most of the foreign speakers only focus on themselves, checking if their sentences are on the right grammar positions or how high-level vocabulary they have included. However, they forget the most important elements on a complete interaction—Listening. By sharing a totally irrelevant response to others is the truth of the failure of communication.
In conclusion, I believed developed a good conversation not only the speaking but also listening, in this reason, speaking in foreign countries might not be the barrier to social communication.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67037037037 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45752395209 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1708693558 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145143639952 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461613981919 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703467090913 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962983775762 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578323255877 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.31 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.