A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Nowadays, tourism gradually becomes the main financial-providing source in several countries, however, there are still disadvantages if it is not controlled correctly. In my opinion, this business can bring many benefits to the country’s economy and job employment, which overwhelm its drawback.
To begin with, over the last few years, people tend to travel to different countries on holidays. As a result, it brings some advantages for the country. Firstly, tourism boosts the country’s income. When traveling, tourists will spend a large amount of money on several things, for example, hotels, tickets, cuisines, and many other fees. These services include tax and the government can earn profit from this. Secondly, the job opportunities for citizens will increase through the tourist industry. To be more specific, the increase in the number of tourists leads to a rise in the demand for accommodation, transportation, and food. Therefore, individuals in host countries can focus on these factors to find jobs, or they can also open more hotels, restaurants to attract travelers.
However, tourism also has a negative impact on the environment. Many visitors throw garbage, plastics, and paper on the streets, beaches, or even in ecotourism areas. Obviously, indiscriminate littering will lead to air pollution and water pollution. A huge amount of waste will make the surrounding environment stink, and water sources will be filled with garbage and cannot be used anymore. Unfortunately, tourists will not think about the problem they cause and it will become worse if the government does not have a solution to manage.
To sum up, tourism has several positive effects, such as economic growth and job employment, which overshadow the downside on the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50362318841 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08166817551 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634057971014 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0805183857 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160233852059 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511938926097 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562959943218 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972820641042 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285849280667 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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