A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
When the issues of traveling come into view, there exist conflicting opinions. Some individuals believe that tourism strengthens national finance as well as reputation. Meanwhile, others hold the notion that traveling activities have negative impacts on the environment. From my point, tourism is a double-edged knife that contains both perks and drawbacks. The essay below will discuss these opinions.
First of all, traveling provides a country with various benefits such as income development or fame. In other words, tourist attractions draw an abundance of people as well as the press’ attention. In consequence, local stores will become popular locations and be visited by plenty of passengers for national souvenirs or goods; therefore, local incomes will significantly rise. Furthermore, to adapt to the increase of needs, the government and local residents will together improve the infrastructure so the standard of living also develops. In brief, tourism brings back lots of advantages for a country in various aspects such as finance or living standards.
On the other hand, traveling can badly damage the environment. For example, during the World Cup, in the stadium, thousands of spectators dumped trash disorderly and this led to environmental pollution as well as global warming. Furthermore, an abundance of trees and natural resources are gathered in order to adapt the use of the participants. As a result, this causes a reduction of animals because of the lack of habitat. Without people’s awareness, tourism is a serious threat to biodiversity.
Summarily, tourism contains two-sided effects so the government should seriously take this issue under consideration to reduce the potential problems as well as to maximize the benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
When the issues of traveling come into v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in brief, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55762081784 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07105499485 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8143217092 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145699954583 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399006386604 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406889292383 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798149745977 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00869707470477 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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