As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are
the problems that young people live in cities are caused by continued growth? What
solutions do you suggest?
In contemporary time, cities are seem to be a promising land, thereby it attract to numerous of migration people from downtown, young people especially. However, they have to confront with the drawbacks of living in this large metropolis. From my perspective, the government could tackle the problem depend on the average inhabitant policy reasonably.
On the one hand, it is noteworthy that younger generation has been gaining the opportunities in this harsh society. Firstly, the unemployment rate is higher than its in countryside areas as the labour market competition, knowledge-based economy and highly skills requirement of employers. Another issue is that the higher living standard in several modern cities is synonymous with the cost of livelihood that are paid much for housing, transport or even food, leading to the economical burden. For typical example, the Parasite is an Asia blockbuster movie which obviously showed the hardly condition when the young people have to live in bustling Korea central.
On the other side, notwithstanding the aforementioned that the government policies play a vital role to shape the inhabitant balance. One of the resolution is invest the number of affordable apartments or residential places for worker and staff who are lacking of pay for housing rental. In addition, developing provincial towns and rural areas would open newly chances, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities. Consequently, the younger people should consider before migrating to big cities through enhance their qualifications, budget management abilities and endeavour as much as possible by themselves.
In conclusion, although living in the huge cities has gained the several disadvantage conditions, I believe that it would become a paradise for energetic young people in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
In contemporary time, cities are seem to be a promising land, thereby it attr...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'attracts'?
Suggestion: attracts
...seem to be a promising land, thereby it attract to numerous of migration people from do...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'invested'.
Suggestion: invested
...itant balance. One of the resolution is invest the number of affordable apartments or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49480968858 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05043550775 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643598615917 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8603364234 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148223429041 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046030059939 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431652339978 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930202657111 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355460432677 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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