The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in cities are facing? How to solve these problems?
The young generation in metropolitan cities are experiencing numerous difficulties because of city expansion. This essay will highlight some problems as well as giving measures to tackle these problems.
To begin with, a large number of young people have to face a competitive labour market. Large cities are home of various companies, which attract people from all around the nation. Take Hanoi as an example, this capital city of Vietnam is the common option of a great number of adolescents from rural areas to look for job opportunities. As a consequence, the young people may have to compete with numerous candidates if they do not want to be unemployed. A solution to mitigate this problem is that the government should encourage the young generation to start their own business. Particularly, when they run a company, they could not only have a career but also create employment chances for others. In Vietnam, there is a program on TV that provides the juveniles with experience and advice to operate their own business. Clearly, this measure may reduce the competitiveness in the labour market.
Another problem is that the young people are put under pressure as the cities have been through developments. To be specific, many people spend a large amount of time at their workplaces to complete their duties as well as working overtime since they do not want to be inferior to others. Therefore, they may suffer from stress, anxiety, depression and other emotional health’s problems. To alleviate this problem, companies and businesses should organise several events or trips to help their employees recharge batteries. For example, numerous companies in Vietnam hold a trip on holidays, so their staff members can have a chance to take a rest, build relationships and relieve stress. As a result, it helps the young people avoid a variety of diseases involving mental health.
To sum up, a great number of adolescents have to face challenges related to unemployment and burden at workplaces. Some useful methods to tackle these problems include encouraging the young people to run their own company as well as providing them with recreational activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1829.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19602272727 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8911690492 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553977272727 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7760617249 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.611111111 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280495111293 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886979476491 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748997647969 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199133519733 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385388543497 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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