As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions for these problems?
In recent decades, globalisation has gradually become a normal concept among many countries around the world. Many unprecedented problems for the youth are generated as a result of the advancement of a great number of metropolitan areas. This essay will highlight the principal causes of these issues and possible solutions to resolve them.
Regarding the problems, since cities experience a fast-paced development, young dwellers residing in those places are suffering from the lack of available occupation and several health diseases. When there are many talented young people gathering in the same location, the job’s requirements will be significantly more complicated and higher for those seeking a new job. Inasmuch as employers have many options, the chance of obtaining employment in developed cities will be reduced. Besides, the bigger the city is, the higher the possibility of getting an illness is. Recent research on the air quality of big cities has pointed out that there is a higher chance for the population, especially the youth, to restrain from respiratory-related diseases.
In terms of solutions, the authorities can allocate the workforce into other nearby regions and create many campaigns to increase young people’s awareness on health. If the government enforces many regulations to encourage companies and employees to work in other areas, such as the suburbs or other provinces, it will greatly reduce the burden of civilisation’s issues in that city. Furthermore, many health-related marketing campaigns can be implemented on social media since the young are regularly active on these platforms. As a result, they will be influenced positively by these messages and concentrate more on their health conditions eventually.
In conclusion, the young population living in metropolitan areas are suffering from numerous problems, such challenges can be resolved by meticulous planning from the society. To the best of my knowledge, I would highly recommend that the youth should be more focused on their health by exercising more and consuming balanced diets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.571875 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13934053336 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0454212966 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.357142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165636199798 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549288559789 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386495651189 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092817246697 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043257622211 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.