As major cities in the world are growing today, so do their problems. What are the problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth? What are the solutions for these problems?
With the prospect of the modern economy, particularly in metropolitan areas, living conditions have improved the quality of life and done many wonders for human life. Yet, there is argued that, along with numerous benefits, this current situation may rise up many problems for the youth if this trend continues to increase. This essay will shed light on several issues for youngsters and suggest possible solutions to address these problems.
One major ground obstacle behind the rising proliferation of urban areas is that young people may suffer from a decrease in the quality of living standards. To be more specific, due to high living expenses in big cities, the youth cannot afford medical fees as well as a house to live in. Therefore, unless there are other better choices for them, they have to shelter in a small house with low living standards, even not receiving a proper healthcare system. This is because the youth have to face intense competition and are put under enormous pressure as well in the harsh market labor, thus many of them cannot be adapted to the quick changes may experience jobless with ease.
Actions must be taken into consideration as soon as possible in order to minimize the detrimental effects caused by this trend. First and foremost, the government should financially support young people who fall below the qualification rates. They should be given monetary assistance to cover their loving costs for a certain period until stability. Therefore, youngsters will have more motivated to wholeheartedly devote to work and sharpen their skills to meet the job requirements. Furthermore, both the local authority and educational institutions should introduce a variety of updated and practical courses so that young employees can achieve up-to-date training and apply those lessons to serve for these days careers.
In conclusion, with the considerable growth of population in urban areas, there are certain problems related to health insurance as well as other aspects of life, typically enhancing the harsh competition in job market, which indirectly reduce the life standards. Nevertheless, these issues are likely to tackle if the government interpreven timely by giving suitable support packages and training sessions to help the youth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32044198895 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77083252768 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613259668508 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3507039332 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.571428571 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18373859846 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567790361698 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346542001202 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102004256092 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328453683231 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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