Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is claimed that residing in a city offers numerous advantages over living in a village. I completely agree with the statement. In my view, living in a city offers lots of opportunities that are not feasible in villages, and I will discuss the same in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are countless benefits for the people who are residing in urban areas. Primarily, job vacancies in innumerable multinational companies are available for the youth and working professionals, which permits them to get work effortlessly. Even the wage is high as compared to the careers in villages. For example, if anyone loses a job due to downsizing, they can simply get another job with a decent salary. Furthermore, education institutions in cities offer improved education to children of city inhabitants. Moreover, 24/7 hospitals and doctors are available in an urban place. As a result, this gives high-quality health amenities to tackle any medical emergency.
Third, people have access to a gamut of facilities, such as recreational parks, clubs, museums, and galleries. In addition to that, it also offers gymnasiums, indoor and outdoor stadiums, helping people to become fit and vigorous human beings. Fourthly, mass transportation in towns helps residents to travel to any place in no time. This also helps them to save time and money. Finally, people get exposed to varying ethnicities and traditions as many people migrate to cities in search of a better standard of living and employment.
Although living in the countryside offers more peace in comparison to the city, the latter has way more advantages than the former.
In conclusion, ultimately, I reiterate my opinion that the choices given by urban places to society are unmatchable compared to a rural area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19444444444 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02879697423 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7617410569 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166885487271 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476465274492 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490661368058 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899876058553 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518184242367 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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