Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
Fortunately, in contemporary world was found how to prevent many comon deseases. One of the most comprehencive way is to vaccinate children. Nevertheless, despite the great benefit of immunization through use vaccines, there is a minority of people, who are strictly againtst this opportunity. They are claiming, that the immune system of a human boddy has to struggle against illness by itself, in some kind of nature way, in addition,they declare that the vaccine itself is nothing more then invasion in the human body with a purpose to make some harm, to reduse the ability of immune system to struggle agains viruses.
I tend to think, that it is hightly effective to vaccinate newborns and todlers. A vide rage of scientific reserches are insisting on its huge benefit. At the same time with the growth of vaccinated people, the level of infected people have been reduced signifficantly. it is also important to take into concidaration the recent epidemy of COVID-19, and a prominent effectivness of vaccine usage.
On the other hand, it would be fair to light out the problem of complications, coused by COVID vaccine. some people are suffering from hart deseases and claiming that it had begun after corona-vaccine. Futhermore, some studies that confim this fact are existing. Additonally, the producing vaccine industry recieve some big investements from government, which means that another areas of medicine are going through the lack of money on their reserches.
To conclude, I suppose that it is better to let individuals deside which to immunize their children or not, because there are some advantages as well as disadvantages. Each person has to have his rights to take into consideration all the studies and practical numbers, and then to make their own conclusion. Not to be forced by law.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, as to, i suppose, in addition, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13851351351 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02029105441 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3786583813 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221341079818 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639885735344 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517869440687 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12038239255 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693007483874 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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