many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both school and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement
These days, compared to the past, food has been developed in order to be healthy for people. However, children nowadays still eat unhealthy food. As a result, it is argued that both education and family are the ones who should be responsible for this issue. In my opinion, I partly disagree with this one. This essay is going to be about the reasons for my answer.
It is true that people these days are having a bad digestion due to junk food, fast food,etc. So are parents and schools responsible for this? Yes, if schools and parents do not teach their kids about eating good or bad food, who will teach them?. Moreover, teenagers still do not have enough awareness about what should eat and should not. For instance, if a candy and carrot is given to a kid, 90% of the kid will choose candy. So, it is sure that schools and families have a huge role in educating the children.
On the other hand, from my perspective, education and family are not the only ones to be criticized, but also the children themselves. As the Internet is 90% accessed by the kids, more knowledge can be gained. Subsequently, the children can know what is good or bad. In order to have a healthy lifestyle, the young have to cooperate with society. But if they do not, it will leave a bad consequence.
In conclusion, I slightly disagree with this statement as the children also have a small role in balancing their diet.
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to candy'
Suggestion: to candy
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n can know what is good or bad. In order to have a healthy lifestyle, the young h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53937007874 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50784929344 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547244094488 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6444952847 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.8235294118 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308333803663 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100749138092 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766644139848 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183978702383 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487247342962 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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