Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern days, the number of children engaging in bad habits which can be harmful to their health is on the increase. Taking teenagers as an example; game addiction, skipping meals, procrastinating, etc. This status quo is voicing concern about who takes responsibility for interfering and modifying those unhealthy routines. From my point of view, not only parents but also schools and the children themselves are responsible for addressing the problem.
Firstly, in my opinion, family plays a key role in setting the stage for children’s habits. If a family has an unhealthy lifestyle, their children who are vulnerable to negative effects can imitate their parents’ bad habits or actions such as biting the nails, picking the nose and non participation in physical exercises. Parents should take drastic measures to raise their boys and girls awareness about the advantages of good habits, take full care of them and at the same time set a good example for them with direct physical experience.
Secondly, schools also have an important role to play as they are responsible for creating a healthy educational environment, especially for adolescents. Youngsters can be affected by negative impacts from their friends' bad habits like swearing or not being punctual. To solve that dilemma, the schools need to create a wholesome education environment and shape the mind so that teenagers can grow up to their best manners.
Last but not least, the children themselves must take responsibility for taking care of their health. Sometimes keeping pace with a busy schedule in daily life, being snowed under with deadlines and assignments can form bad habits like skipping breakfasts, staying up late and oversleeping. Teenagers must be self-disciplined to reach a healthy balance between work and self-care. Furthermore, they also must be self-controlled to not be involved in detrimental habits affected by friends or the surrounding environment.
In conclusion, it is commonly opined that paters and teaching centers both are responsible for making a fit lifestyle for adolescents. But my view is that not only parents and schools but also children should be self-aware to manage their habits.
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- Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem To what extent do you agree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge o 78
- Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem To what extent do you agree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge o 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34195402299 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05020851166 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560344827586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5424420432 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1875 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196337034361 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721087450228 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602110112188 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125692220321 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485273795328 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.