In many cities crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce crime levels?
Endemic crime entailing burglaries, pilfering, shoplifting, etc have already perplexed many governors for a period of time. While the statistics printed in their annual reports revealing how rampant these wrongdoers were, we have to delve into the reasons behind the growth of conviction and work with the local government to carry out some sagacious action.
Imbalanced allocation of wealth is the main culprit of most misdeeds. Transgression, at any rates, are committed on account of seizing wealth rapidly with considerable smaller effort. While the acquisition of restrained resources that end up with living quality and opportunity are onerous in particular nations, one born with misfortune befell or deprivation of skills and knowledge might mean to contend in a distorted way to accomplish his goal. This twisted mind resulting a hurtful intrigue might eventually traumatize or impair the development of others, thereby crime emerges.
Enlightenment of respect through education is a plausible way that counteract the aforementioned mentality. By all accounts, imposing heavy penalty constitutes an effective remedy on crime prevention, covert crimes relating to corruption and abuse are however improbable to unearth without devoting enormous effort and cost on prosecution. The core value of respect leads people to show empathy and be compassionate towards others. With the aroused patience, generosity and kindness, a community of affable nature is willing to listen and dedicate time to those losers, crime would be alleviated.
To elucidate, as for the shortfall of wealth is incessant, perception of respect, to my mind, is the most auspicious way to cuddle the losers and preclude them from being estranged from the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... already perplexed many governors for a period of time. While the statistics printed in their ...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a distorted way" with adverb for "distorted"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...lls and knowledge might mean to contend in a distorted way to accomplish his goal. This twisted mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, as for, in particular, at any rate
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60754716981 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04260479363 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701886792453 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.380729171 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.090909091 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943864016587 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316897399262 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396966179479 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479385221482 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315588144224 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.2 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.