In many cities, many people are living in apartment blocks.
Does this accommodation have more advantages and disadvantages.
Owing to the burgeoning population in urban areas,choosing a place for being accommodated has been turning little difficult, over the past few years. It has been seen that a large proportion of people are choosing to live in high rise apartment blocks. In my opinion, although, these blocks of flats are often economically cheaper, they offer cramped living space and can present serious.
One predominant advantage to living in multi-storey apartment blocks is that it facilitiates people affordable accommodation in urban areas with the growth of urban population, land is becoming increasingly expensive.As a result, many people are not able to afford to their own houses. In other words, large apartment blocks require a small area of land but can provide lot of flats, which enables people who have low incomes thereby, making them live nearby city centres and their job.
Despite the above merits, living in high rise apartment has some potential drawbacks. High rise apartments and blocks usually offer small apartments with no outdoor areas. More specifically, this can be a problem for families as each individual member would have little personal space which can result into family conflicts, leading to violation of relationships. Likewise, such restricted living quarters offers no space for exercise, which is a vital requirement for healthy living.
Furthermore, the worst problem of living in a high rise blocks or flats is the fire risk it bring if a fire breaks out in one of the flat the number of floors in the building means that people can get easily trapped on the top floors, unable to escape the fire . For instance, 71 persons died in London in 2017 when they were caught in a fire outbreak in royal tower , and the fire further spread through 24 floor, putting the lives of people at stack.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, large blocks of flats can be advantageous in terms of affordability,yet, I strongly believe that the downside of this type of accommodation outshine the upside due to serious fire danger as well as deteriorating if family relationship owing to congested place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, likewise, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13623188406 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92151371419 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0402859103 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.666666667 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233776731448 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828514490658 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559023311773 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117770121228 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553172653134 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.