In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Indeed, the modern tendencies show the clear picture that a huge amount of people prefer to live in apartment building and, obviously, it has own pros and cons for the citizens. In this essay , I will try to show my extended view to this statement.
First of all, bying an apartment provides a valuable benefits to the owner, such as price for the flat, doubtless, the cost for the apartment block is a quite less cheaper in comparison to cottage house and hence people could gain a consierge, laundry and 24/7 monitoring facilities. Secondly, the apartments usualy located on the city territory and hereby gives a great opportunity for the citizens, fo instance, easy accessibility to the entertainments, transport services, educational buildings and etc. Obviously, this services arranging people's life more comfortable.
However, living in large apartmnets block is flawed owing to several reasons. To begin with, not all of us are so lucky to live in a friendly apartment community. Some of neighbours could be totally noisy and it inevitably them to obey to house community's rules in order to avoid nnpleasant consiquinces with neighbours. Morover, there is no doubt, that block apartmnets mostly located in urban area which regarded as having negative impact on environment caused by building materials, construction methods and etc.
To sum up, choosing living in large block apartmnets connected to people personality. During selection where to buy a house, people must take into their consideration the pros and cons of living in apartment and compare to current potential needs. It is the only way to make the right choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less cheap'?
Suggestion: less cheap
...cost for the apartment block is a quite less cheaper in comparison to cottage house and henc...
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ansport services, educational buildings and etc. Obviously, this services arranging peop...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the neighbours') or simply say ''Some neighbours''.
Suggestion: Some of the neighbours; Some neighbours
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17358490566 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94459791914 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652830188679 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7338348031 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217307077234 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744589310651 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427534905377 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120850811872 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130544547849 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.