Many countries are currently witnessing an increase in criminal activity among young people. Discuss reasons for this phenomenon and suggest ways to deal with the problem.
An alarming problem of metropolises all over the world is the rise in the number of young criminals. This essay will discuss some typical causes can be attributed to this issue, and some measures could be taken to deal with this worrying trend.
There are two remarkable reasons why youngster tend to commit crimes more in big cities. Firstly, the education system nowadays are focusing on knowledge of various subjects yet ignoring the importance of life skills and law. Without life skills, an offspring may grow up and have no conflict-solving skills, tolerance and self-control; without knowledge of law, they may not be conscious of which actions are considered to be violating criminal law. In addition, puberty is also an extremely sensitive periods as the hormones change and a teenager tends to be more quick-tempered and impulsive. All of these probably lead to violent crime stemming from a tiny conflict with friends or even family members. A sorrowful example in Vietnam is that a 15 year-old boy killed his own grandmother, just because she did not give him pocket money. Secondly, the rocket-speed of Internet and social media development means that the youth nowadays are easily exposed to online contents, the majority of which are unhealthy such as violence, crime and even pornography. Their immature brains may think some illegal actions look cool, absorb these negative things fast and apply them onto real life.
Several solutions could be adopted to mitigate this problem. One measure is that parents and teachers should pay more attention on educating law and soft skills for their children. With supervision and care from adults, adolescences are less likely to break the law. Additionally, parents also should control their children's time spending on the Internet as well as the contents they see to limit access to inappropriate topics.
In conclusion, causes of rising crime rates among young people in major cities can be identified, but luckily, some solutions could be applied to tackle this matter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18237082067 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75941977631 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644376899696 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9851490089 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135772322023 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417511115617 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434377935601 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957424701593 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054128493599 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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