In many counties, more and more women have full-time jobs as men. There is a logic that they should share the housework equally with men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that nowadays both men and women can be the breadwinner of the family. As both genders contribute to the family financially, I strongly adhere to the notion that they should also devote their effort equally into doing home chores.
Firstly, sharing household chores equally between male and female helps build a happy family. According to the traditional way of thinking, women are supposed to do all the housework. However, unlike housewives, working mothers cannot be expected to do all the jobs around the house when, along with men, they also have to spend 10 hours at workplace and earn money. Visualizing a woman arriving home from work after an exhausted day, she will easily be frustrated and fuming towards her husband and children if she has to clean up the mess they left, not because she is tired, but because the other members do not sympathize and help her in their house. This will result in an upset family. By assigning clearly tasks for each family member, people can foster a healthy home as women will have less burden, men will understand the struggle of house chores, which they often take for granted as well as pay more respect towards his spouse, and children will learn to be responsible for their future family.
Secondly, sharing chores is taking the first steps to achieve gender equality. Women are under countless underground judgement and standard set by the society. For example, in countries with severe gender prejudice or under serious affect of Confucianism, women are required to keep their virginity until they get married, or to be in charge of all housework as well as upbringing off-springs. In addition, females often considered to be inferior to males at workplace. Based on median earning data from the Census Current Population Survey, women are paid about 17% less than men. However, when men offer great assistance with taking care of the family, people will no longer assume "Chores are women thing". As a result, women will have less concern and be able to dedicate to her occupation and social status.
In conclusion, I completely agree that men and women should share effort in caring for their home as it helps build a decent family as well as approaching the goal of gender equality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92146596859 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54519737138 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578534031414 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0936937275 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230833616094 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725083327649 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439212167187 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148089379461 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113504209266 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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