Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities while others think that people have the freedom do whatever sports they choose.
As human's life standard is rising, there are increasing demands on different ways of entertainment and novel experiences, and extreme sport is one of those. A heating controversy has been aroused on whether the government should prohibit dangerous sports or just let people be free to perform any activities. While extreme sports maybe risky, I opine the latter idea, that people should be given freedom to play the sports they enjoy.
On the one hand, treacherous activities not only endanger the players' life but also that of other people. It is undeniable that they are responsible for hundreds of death every year. A famous example for this is the late actor Paul Walker, starring in Fast and Furious series, who died of injuries from collision on while speeding. Moreover, the death toll may not stop at the players, as the rescue teams are also put at risk when trying to rescue them or worse, trying to find the bodies on challenging range of mountains or under deep abysses.
On the other hand, despite the danger, I believe that the government should not forbid this type of sports because sanctions may lead to even harder control of them. "Forbidden fruits are always the sweetest", prohibition will trigger curiosity, resulting in people performing these actions illegally. The protection will be less official and less proper, as a result, the death toll can be even higher than when it is confirmed by the law. The missing or injured victims probably will not be announced for a decent search for fear of being caught violating the law.
In conclusion, whereas risky sports imperil the life of players, I think government should not forbid these activities as prohibition can lead to illegal scenes which are more difficult to manage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'players'' or 'player's'?
Suggestion: players'; player's
...herous activities not only endanger the players life but also that of other people. It ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99319727891 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68896859126 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5160370662 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269932441592 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926384198886 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097437204128 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156577067782 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969200428852 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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