Many countries are currently witnessing an increase in criminal activity among young people.
Discuss reasons for this phenomenon and suggest ways to deal with the problem.
It is obvious in today's world that crime rates have been drastically increasing and many nations are viewing those activities especially among younger generation. Some of the reasons include excitement in the minds of young people let them try new things and lack of proper support system. Moreover, early education in schools by certain activities and obtaining experiences of previous criminals serving the society would be far beneficial.
Brain plays a vital role in creating enthusiasm by releasing certain flight and fight hormones like adrenaline during adolescent age when the mind is excited to do adventurous things. Young people in particular, does not know the result of committing a big mistake usually are in a rush to do crimes like robbery, theft and using drugs. A recent survey conducted by a team at Australian Bureau of Investigation (ABI) found that the young individuals that are caught in the crime scene either do it for fun or with lack of insight because of improper family conditions.
However, youth can be provided insight by implementing some activities in classrooms that not only improves their positive thoughts but also prevent them from doing mistakes that have negative impacts on their career and future. Encouraging individual’s active participation in sports, community activities by showing live examples of people who suffered from committing major crimes will be very helpful. For example, senior jailer Ben at Lidcombe jail said that the rates of young people coming back to incarceration has been reduced after having some valuable chat with senior criminals that are current employees.
To conclude, although the crime rates among teenagers are growing across the globe due to improper care, applying strategies through education and live experiences will prevent misconduct.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...es especially among younger generation. Some of the reasons include excitement in the minds...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, thus, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40701754386 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81541725692 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.5600982799 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.1 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178202707251 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649610888004 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411567374638 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959605645464 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533915499657 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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