In many countries children spend long hours on homework Some people think less homework can reduce student s stress and give them a chance to develop other skills What is your opinion about this

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In many countries, children spend long hours on homework. Some people think less homework can reduce student's stress and give them a chance to develop other skills. What is your opinion about this?

Over the last few decades, the way of study has changed. Today mostly schools like to give number of worksheets to solve. However, a section of society object that and believe decrease the burden of assignments helps pupils' to get stress free and gives opportunity to work on their abilities. But, I partially agree with this statement and I will discuss my reasons for partial agreement and draw my opinion as conclusion.
To commence with, although sports and other artistic activities are crucial for every child's development. Nevertheless, along with that, daily academic work helps children to learn other skills such as self disciplined and time management. To explicate, time management plays an indispensable role for the betterment of learners and schools as well as colleges is considered as the best place for it. If student can do their homework in given time they do not struggle in future to organise tasks. Moreover, daily habit of doing work promotes good study habits which helps tuties to perform well in examination. Indian, case in point, according to a survey held in the year 2020 that the students who avoid doing daily study suffer a lot in exams.
On the other hand, it is true that, daily study is a convenient and effective way to utilise the time precisely. However, students also ought to participate in other competition in their leisure time and do some physical activities to boost concentration which helps them to concentrate in a better way. Teachers also should not overburdened the students with homework and gives work to keep it in mind that they do some physical activities as well.
In conclusion, homework should be there, as it has many benefits, but it should be within reasonable limits and should promote real learning.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...is considered as the best place for it. If student can do their homework in given ...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'overburden'
Suggestion: overburden
... a better way. Teachers also should not overburdened the students with homework and gives wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99661016949 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75240043051 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2708068365 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147609198456 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470062976499 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385096917454 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841866553099 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262312096126 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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