In many countries the government likes to spend more money on the arts.some people agree with this. however other think government should spend more on health and education .discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Since, Art plays pragmatic role to human life because art depicts culture of society. But it is tntrigurd controversial issue that state invest money on other activities such as health and education.So every supporter will have distinct mind set.In this essay I will elucidate both views before reaching to final conclusion.
First and foremost , Arts is also essential in life we could express our emotion and mental ability in front of other.Secondly , many countries such as UK , Canada , Australia also organized art museum for people, they can seeing wonderful exhibition free of cost and got great knowledge about ancient things.Thirdly , government maintain these museum by hiring staff member's thus unemployment rate degrade and youngest achive job through museum.
shifting towards second school that hospitals and school , college , universities must be important for well being community.Firstly , state provide free of cost education to needy students that might be leader of nation in coming years.Otherwise youth should be uneducated , prosperity of nation as well as workforce activity degrade due to lack of knowledge and skills.
Further more , hospitals also establish by governmeny to cope with multifarious diseases Thus save live of masses.For instance , if state should not invest money for hospitals then population of people must steadly decrease.
To recapitulate Art have own benefits in human life. So hospital and education have paramount role for human life so state should allocate money for colonization nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59227467811 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00951137129 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695278969957 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.28385609 49.4020404114 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.142857143 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2857142857 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.1428571429 7.06120827912 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143988428961 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061894334729 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263182639078 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734406523208 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289727911404 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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