Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays television play pragmatic role in everyone juvenile life.few people reckon that children are not intelligent as compared to past generation other deny that to learn through hi tech medias has play significant role rather then bookish studious.here i would elucidate my few points before reaching to final conclusion.
First of all,books increase the lingistic capability of youth so they can read any plenty of information from manually sources .secondly,they will imcrease mentall ability as well as power of thinking skyshoot.
On the other hand,television play ubiquitous role in human life.students prefer to perform study related task through modern technique and innovative method.but thus their linguistic ability must be decrease.owing to that,they will not concentrate on their study because TV also provide some sitcoms, violence ,cambat like information to increase viewer ,so children act like them .further they willnot identified difference betweenreal life and virtual life . for instance ,if a peer want to become a doctor he/she will not get plethora of information pratically and theoretically by using Tv.
To recapitulate,according to my behalf reading through rudimentary method is best policy for children as compared to contempray method.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80319148936 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31662056999 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5661925327 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 272.75 106.682146367 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.0 20.7667163134 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.75 7.06120827912 421% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855253563497 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478672398719 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219366609894 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0499871474759 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205251933279 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.85 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.76 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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