In contemprary era, Technology has brought a pragmatic change in everyone life.Civilization has seeing wonderful discoveries from smart phone to landing on space.Some folks believe that technology had plethora of advantages while other deny that it had bad repercussions.
To commence with that, there are myraid of benefits.Firstly, In medical field have invented a paramount Vaccination, medicine to tackle with hazardous diseases such as polio, cancer etc.For instance, In medieval age, people died due to lack of treatment, now varities of facilities provide and find out diseases easily to human body through innovative technique, human could live more.Secondly, Most of masses can travel one country to another by air transportation without wastage of precious time .Thirdly,Now in agriculture field farmer harvested seedless fruits and vegetables in many countries through innovative technology.Additionally, Furthermore folks can talk with relative,virtual friend, chat and face to face communicate like minded masses without going to anywhere.Although, colossal upsurge also visible in business and trade sector, therefore quality of products and look can be better by technology.
On the sinister sides, there are lot of demerits people must stuck with smart phone around a clock to play games, watching video etc.that can be harmful mentally and physical level.Furthermore, invention of asernals can diminishing whole life of human.
To recapitulate, i can personally acknowledge that there have also highly cons but no one can deny its pros.
- One of the most important issues faving the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits Do you agree or disagree 51
- Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television However television cannot replace the book as a learning tool which is why children are less well educated today To what extent do you agree with this statement 56
- some people belive that studing at university is tge best route to a successful carrer while others belive that it is better to get a job straight after school discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in tv video games and other types of entertainment for childrens leisure how does this affect children how do you think problem xan be tackled 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77542372881 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60687314697 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720338983051 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 314.613552632 49.4020404114 637% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 340.75 106.682146367 319% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.0 20.7667163134 284% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.75 7.06120827912 450% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0574556503557 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286362218432 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0194636741936 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0286362218432 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194636741936 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.3 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.33 50.2224549098 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.13 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.25 8.58950901804 143% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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