Many countries import large amounts of food from other parts of
the world. Is this a positive or negative development?
The rising number of nations have a tendency to import the majority of food from different countries. From my perspective, i consider it to be a positive development.
On the one hand, the fact that the growing proportion of imported food comes to the country could result in tough competitions between domestic and international businesses. IF S+V, domestic food brands could be replaced by more popular international companies, and therefore countless start-ups and small businesses are prone to earning less profits and in turn going bankrupt. For example, China faces the prospect of losing market share in terms of milk products due to the significant popularity of Vinamik, which is a Vietnamese milk brand, among Chinese consumers especially Chinese mothers who are impressed by its quality.
On the other hand, I believe that importing large numbers of food from numerous corners around the world could culminate in cross-cultural representations of gastronomy and wider range of choices for domestic citizens. First of all, the main benefit of imported food is that current residents gain a wider range of choices with regard to nutrient-dense, superfood recipes. In fact, it would be beneficial for citizens to cook various types of nutritious meals everyday, whereas consumers who depend on only a few domestic brands may be limited to less options of food they want to purchase. Secondly, people in this country are conducive to relishing food delicacies which are non-existent in their home country. For example, Japanese people in Kyoto are able to cook famous Idian food which is Chicken Makhani without having to flight to India in order to buy necessary ingredients.
In conclusion, although i recognize some potential obstacles for dosmetic businesses to thrive in their own country, i strongly concur with the idea of importing food which could result in more diverse food culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3102310231 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94441233289 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597359735974 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7097525565 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.272727273 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9090909091 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208277708986 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835431308157 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571864435802 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126543171269 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537617683267 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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