In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There has been a rising number of mature people living with their parents although they have already finished school and been employed. While this trend has some potential advantages, I believe that its drawbacks are more impressive.
On the one hand, growth people who still live with their own parents can save money and escape from isolation. First of all, because numerous young people want to own a convenient apartment rather than stay in a poor-quality rented house, they want to earn enough money to purchase their dream homes someday. Secondly, as more time is spent on family members, the feelings of loneliness are no longer a nightmare for countless adults. People are likely to become depressed and lonely because of excessive workloads which they are expected to assume a higher volume of work, often with insufficient levels of support and encouragement. As a result, this could weaken their relationships and put them in isolation, so their situations are well taken care of as their parents are always there for them.
On the other hand, adults can battle with the gap generation in lifestyles and their private time being invaded. Firstly, as living with their parents, adults can suffer from different mindsets between generations concerning ways of living. For example, in some families, young women might be forced to start dating seriously, get married, and have kids while they just simply want to have fun and enjoy their youth time. Various parents insist that marriage and having kids are the priority, although countless adults choose to love someone due to their emotions and simultaneously affectionate moments. Secondly, their private moments can be interrupted as their parents always want to keep track of what their kids are doing, who they are dating. Therefore, this could lead to irritation and unpleasantness among young people.
In conclusion, while there are some potential advantages concerning living with their parents, growth people seem to deal with more problems in terms of conflicting lifestyles and unwanted attention from their own family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25074626866 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63430764019 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570149253731 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4246303544 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.642857143 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27577839177 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970236259729 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502418720777 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188001421459 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269152027855 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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