In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes. However, some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When it comes to preventing crimes, there is a controversy among if people need to be
punished, or only educational methods are enough. Looking at some evidence in the past,
everyone can see clearly that most of the crimes were reduced by laws or rules, which
eventually end up with punishments. That is why imprisonment plays an important and
efficient role in controlling crimes in countries.
Speaking of learning from failure, no one can deny the positive effect of punishment
that it can help people be aware of their own mistakes. To be more specific, take an
exceptional student as an example because needless to say, a school is just a small
society with all of the necessary components. In every school, all students will be
taught how to behave reasonably and acceptably. They will also be given some laws and
rules that they should follow in order to maintain a smooth educational environment.
Those students all understand what they will face if they break the rules - an
appropriate punishment. With the help of those rules, the students will think more
carefully before crossing the line. Moreover, even when they do that, what they
receive from the related authority will become a cautious notice for the next law
violence.
Another reason for using punishment to solve crimes problem is that we - human - are
still a kind of animal with our natural instinct. In fact, it is impossible for people to
control themselves avoid our nature. No matter how much we learn or train ourselves,
it always tell us to follow what we feel enjoyable. It is undeniable that there is a big
number of talented students - who were well-educated with stable living condition -
caught by damaging both national and personal assets. Some of them were even sent to
jails for some sexual crimes. Those cases have proven that human being is not reliable.
To build a safe and peaceful country, there is a need to have a law system with suitable
punishments.
In conclusion, every country needs to consider thoroughly what they are required to
obtain their societies’ security. Obviously, laws and punishments are necessary to deal
with crime problems. It is definitely essential for everyone to have a caution and
remind for what they will gain when they violate the laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13612565445 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75090055781 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0249526873 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.38176352705 616% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174152452501 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511300934834 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335115139672 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440954536778 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362981871853 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.