Many parents send their children to a language center to learn a foreign language such as English as early as they are 5 or 6 years old. It is believed that they both enjoy some benefits and face some problems as well. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (There are more advantages than disadvantages?)
In this day and age, more and more children are forced to learn a second language such as English at the age of five or six. Even so, I believe the negatives this symptom bring are more considerable than those positives.
To begin with, going to a language center to learn a foreign language can make the children to lose their childhood. In other words, kids at this age should have their own thoughts about things, events or build something on their own to shape their creativity. Therefore, they will have their happiness, which is the adults lack of, and know the way to tackle the issues sometime. Moreover, if the child spends most of his or her time learning a new language, he or she might not expand the social circles. From the immemorial time to the future, people could not live solely forever. They would need someone to lend an ear to their happy or bad things in order not to feel depression. Nevertheless, studying too much too soon like this may take their chance to make friends away.
However, it is the kids being five or six years old who can learn that language easier at schools than others students because they have known about it already. Nonetheless, in my point of view, children at this age are not mature enough to remember as well as review everything they have studied, especially a subject that require a good memory and hard-working revision.
In conclusion, I think the advantage of this phenomenon can not outweigh its disadvantage due to the reasons I have mentioned above, which are deficient youth and friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, well, even so, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7326007326 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5236367347 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622710622711 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2996786028 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9166666667 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222737335581 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743804436253 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062650370826 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117626443569 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373599408108 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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