In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think it is happening? How to solve this issue?
It is widely acknowledged that human activities are having a devastating impact on the natural environment, leading to the extinction of thousands of plant and animal species. This essay will outline ways in which humans are contributing to this situation before suggesting several viable solutions.
There are some main reasons contributing to this issue. One of the primary causes of the depletion of animal and plant populations is the overconsumption of fossil fuels, both in production and daily life. The burning of these fuels increases the amount of CO2 in the atmosphere, exacerbates climate change, and drives some species to the brink of extinction as they are unable to adapt and tolerate the changing conditions. In addition, the overexploitation of natural resources such as mines and forests leads to habitat loss and further biodiversity decline.
To address these issues, national governments should take steps to protect endangered species by establishing national parks and wildlife sanctuaries. For example, many African countries have created parks to shelter endangered species such as elephants, lions, and rhinos. Additionally, raising public awareness about the importance of forest conservation can encourage individuals to reduce carbon emissions by using public transportation or renewable energy sources like solar and wind power. Finally, adopting eco-friendly lifestyle habits, such as reducing meat consumption, can also help to mitigate the impact of human activity on the environment.
In conclusion, the abuse of non-renewable resources and overexploitation of resources of nature are major causes of the dwindling numbers of animals and plants.. It is essential that government policies and public awareness campaigns work together to ensure the survival of many species for generations to come.
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- Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some species to the brink of extinction as they are unable to adapt and tolerate...
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... dwindling numbers of animals and plants.. It is essential that government policie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75091575092 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20105864092 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622710622711 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1515124284 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.833333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106132802176 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374520995995 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332103871141 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649142498375 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257784086616 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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