Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The ongoing debate regarding whether children should be permitted to make errors has been a topic of discussion for quite some time. While some individuals argue that children have the freedom to make mistakes, others contend that adults must intervene and prevent them from doing so. In my opinion, making mistakes is an indispensable aspect of children's development, but adult supervision is necessary to forestall potential harm.
On one hand, making mistakes is a natural component of the learning process. Allowing youngsters to experiment and take risks, even if it means experiencing failure occasionally, assists them in learning from their experiences and developing essential soft skills such as problem-solving and critical thinking. Additionally, it fosters resilience and self-assurance, which are crucial traits in both life and future professions. However, stalling children from making errors could impede their independence and autonomy, as they become too reliant on adults.
On the other hand, some individuals believe that adults must intervene and prevent children from making mistakes owing to their vulnerability. Children might not anticipate the severity of consequences that may result from their actions, which could cause significant harm to themselves and others. Consequently, adults must ensure kids' safety and safeguard them from potential dangers. Preventing mistakes can also decrease the likelihood of physical injuries and emotional damage, which may negatively impact children's growth and development.
In conclusion, it is imperative for children to make mistakes as it constitutes a fundamental aspect of their development. Nevertheless, adults should supervise and guide them to evade potential harm and guarantee their safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89534883721 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11316565132 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4374428905 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399508681647 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145119220195 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104657429614 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247783551939 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110765916452 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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