In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
it is recorded that nowadays many continents have a growing ageing population. A society where there are more elderly citizens than young people can has some negative effects such as lack of workers or pressure on hospitals and doctors when it comes to health problems. On the contrary, the old generations definately have more experience and knowledge than the young ones and they can be benefit by learning from them.
Starting with the disadvantage sides of an ageing population. Firstly, a residents which have more old people than young ones means that it may be lack of employees when it comes to jobs that requires strength rather than experience such as builders or cleaners. A civilian can run successfully and smoothly if there is a cooperation of professors and workers. For example, while architects are able to design buildings or even solve environmental problems, without workers they will not be able to construct buildings. In addition to that, an ageing population means that citizens in that society will undergone many health problems or will take care of their health, eventually lead to the overwhelming of hospitals and doctors will be under a lot of pressure.
On the other hand, elderly people have more knowledge and experience which will benefit for educate the youth. For example, schools and universities can hire experienced professors to teach students. Teachers who live long enough to fully understand life will have a calm manner and right attitude that is a good example for their pupils to look up to, which will make the teaching and learning process more proficent.
To conclude, ageing population may caused some disadvantages such as lacking of appropriate workers for jobs that value strength more than experience or the vast number of old people may contributed to the overwhelming of hospitals. However, the younger generations can learn a lot from the previous generations because they have more experience and knowledge.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is recorded that nowadays many continen...
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Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'have'.
Suggestion: have
... elderly citizens than young people can has some negative effects such as lack of w...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a resident' or simply 'residents'?
Suggestion: a resident; residents
...sides of an ageing population. Firstly, a residents which have more old people than young o...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ones'' or 'one's'?
Suggestion: ones'; one's
...s which have more old people than young ones means that it may be lack of employees ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, while, even so, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19122257053 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84911764058 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510971786834 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3969696197 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255042206769 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925915424032 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700964379208 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165960542889 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016727643176 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is recorded that nowadays many continen...
^^
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'have'.
Suggestion: have
... elderly citizens than young people can has some negative effects such as lack of w...
^^^
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a resident' or simply 'residents'?
Suggestion: a resident; residents
...sides of an ageing population. Firstly, a residents which have more old people than young o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ones'' or 'one's'?
Suggestion: ones'; one's
...s which have more old people than young ones means that it may be lack of employees ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, while, even so, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19122257053 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84911764058 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510971786834 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3969696197 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255042206769 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925915424032 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700964379208 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165960542889 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016727643176 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.