In many countries, people are working increasingly longer hours. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative effect?
Nowadays long hours of work are more usual than before in most countries. This essay intends to explain the reason for this phenomenon and outline this would be a negative impact on a person and society.
There are many reasons behind the continued working schedule. firstly, completing the target in a limited period of time is a crucial challenge for every employee. Most companies would try to cut off the employee's salary in order to unfinished target. secondly, lack of employees and excessive work is another major problem in many countries. For instance, the hospital sector is suffering from staff shortages and the remaining employees are the ones who choose to work more than their time of work. The other factor of long-hour working is inflation. people need to work more to fulfill their cost of living and services. therefore people are forced to seek twice jobs to reach out to their enough money.
Extra hours of work often produce a negative effect on people and society too. Lack of free time and stressful work may lead to health problems and family issues to some extent. For instance, many employees have complained about cardiovascular problems and disc problems to the core. similarly, there are many workers facing family conflict related to a lack of time spent with their partner or children. There are social problems such as lack of interpersonal relationships and communication that might lead to loneliness and solitary feel. long hours of works also affect the energy and power to the core.
long hours of work are inevitable in many countries, though which would affect badly the person and the community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Suggestion: period
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
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Suggestion: Secondly
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Suggestion: People
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...fill their cost of living and services. therefore people are forced to seek twice jobs to...
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Suggestion: Similarly
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Suggestion: Long
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Suggestion: Long
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0293040293 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57199726552 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553113553114 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1380678983 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7647058824 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302696706561 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984139457908 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727791717812 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186861811503 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423122634951 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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