In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could.
Why do you think this is? What can be done to change this?
recycling is one of the most effective ways to solve environmental problems in contemporary society. people are not aware of the consequences of this. they do not take measures to improve recycling of trash.
There are many possible starting points that could explain this issue. The most obvious reason is that the community is not exposed to essential education. Due to the lack of knowledge about the significance of waste separation in each house, The whole litter is gathered in the landfill regardless of its type. It means that the utilitarian material that could have been sorted and reused cannot be distinguished from Non-recyclable waste anymore. Consequently, a huge mass of waste become unusable. The other reason that should be taken into consideration is the ignorance of legislating new recycling laws. For example, in Iran there is no regulation that people who do not distinct their disposable substances would possibly get a fine.
To solve this problem, governments should take appropriate actions such as enacting strict principles and penalties against citizens who won’t detach their waste. Additionally, the recycling association that are in charge should reward the ones who are committed to their social responsibility in exchange for reasonable money. Moreover, the government should increase the awareness of society about the advantages of recycling for prohibition of future disasters. broad social advertisements and hands-on education could benefit people by boosting their knowledge.
To conclude, by considering the fact that most of mentioned problems are driven by the dominant social insensibility, the possible approach would be instituting foundations of social responsibilities in the form of guidelines. To penalize the ones who do not respect the approved laws, could also be mandatory. In addition, the government can create a supportive atmosphere by social advertisements and education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58843537415 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20720885274 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3807023467 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6470588235 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239116865888 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753996429314 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617272502078 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146892070915 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436978356853 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.