In many countries people do not recycle used materials glass paper and metal enough What do you think the major reason for that What do you think can be done to resolve this issue

Essay topics:

In many countries people do not recycle used materials ( glass,paper and metal) enough. What do you think the major reason for that? What do you think can be done to resolve this issue?

In majority of nation’s around the world individual’s do not recycle such as crystal,papers,metal because of shortage of time and and workload. I think that recycling company and low price can wind this problem up. I will discus in details.

To begin with, recycle material is the biggest issue for people and to overcome this problem government of every country must built recycle departments all over the glob. To elaborate this act will make many to recycle their wastage and make re use it. For instance Dubai is planning to built a machine which will be able to reshape 950kg waste item’s in 1 hour and will be able to use again. At the results if monstrous machines are available in every country it will save time and straggle of people.

In addition, to cut recycle problem companies giving low rates to their consumers is also the alternative way to tale this problem to knee’s furthermore Rachel recycle and co based in Alaska is best group to contact because they are giving reasonable packages to reform their damaged products where customer’s also show love towards deal they are providing. Thus, low rate from dealers is also helping individuals to recycle.
In conclusion, more recycle companies in every state and getting good rates from them will cut out this problem,while i think governments should look to appoint more workers for this job

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96103896104 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7754623884 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.3140526457 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200807005799 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745789703573 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542438582875 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117011419661 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541596668238 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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