Bing a celebrity Such as a famous Film Star or Sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
MANY think that celebrity like an athleth or an movie entertaner must have banifical Life as well as they must face stot of difficulties as well where as i believe that they face more issues as compered to goods we will discus in ditals. below.
Being a Sports person or film maker they a film face a real throubles. Now a day which are common issues these days Such as Cinema Stars DY Sports persnality it is So havd to get out in markets for example I was watching a short Clip where Bollywood Super Star Salman Khan was went to market. place to borrow Some think while doing Shoping all of his lovers across Ground him to take autographs, selfis as the result he got boxed and rainaway towards his trasport.Second most Common issue Entertainer's are Facing is they need to keep their body fit as compered to other's to remain fit athlet's put their Body online do exercise Diets to Competet among other Stars. Such as a well Known Cricket rock stars and King of king of his profession virat Kholf in his recent interview to Fox chanle He Consider that to be active I Keep my Self away from junks and from oily Food where he told told to the interviewer that from last 7 year I didn't had thesee burgures and I used to spend two hours in Fitness club to avoid lazynees and Such things releted] to it. To Sumerine every Social woreker Such as Sports person or Cenima Stars Face alot of issues in their Daily rotuine where I think they must give a little bit of redexstion to their Self to enjoy their Life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...think that celebrity like an athleth or an movie entertaner must have banifical Li...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... must face stot of difficulties as well where as i believe that they face more issues as...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e stot of difficulties as well where as i believe that they face more issues as c...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Below
...ered to goods we will discus in ditals. below. Being a Sports person or film maker...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Place
...er Star Salman Khan was went to market. place to borrow Some think while doing Shopin...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Second
...boxed and rainaway towards his trasport.Second most Common issue Entertainers are Faci...
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Line 5, column 709, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'King of'.
Suggestion: King of
... as a well Known Cricket rock stars and King of king of his profession virat Kholf in his recen...
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'considers'.
Suggestion: Considers
...n his recent interview to Fox chanle He Consider that to be active I Keep my Self away f...
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Line 5, column 879, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: told
... from junks and from oily Food where he told told to the interviewer that from last 7 yea...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...the interviewer that from last 7 year I didnt had thesee burgures and I used to spend...
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Line 5, column 1045, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '[' seems to be missing
...o avoid lazynees and Such things releted] to it. To Sumerine every Social woreker...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... rotuine where I think they must give a little bit of redexstion to their Self to enjoy th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, well, while, for example, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37722419929 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26517976635 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622775800712 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.201782738 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.0 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.8333333333 20.7667163134 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156669713553 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083451554432 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407547045935 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117068781211 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00874202560081 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.71 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.01 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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