In many countries, people like to eat a wide variety of food that are grown in other areas. As
a result, they eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of
this development outweighs the disadvantages?
Over the past decades, daily diet has become more diversified than before with food imported for other regions. Many people prefer consuming a wide range of food from neighboring countries to those local products. Although this tendency is gaining more expand and more benefits, I believe that its drawbacks are more considerable for following some reasons.
On the one hand, it is noteworthy that there are heaps of merits for give increasing preference to food imported. Firstly, this trend could enhance the variety of foods, thereby guaranteeing the sufficient intake of nutrition. For example, those who has been living in cold areas where having the extremely weather poses a number of hardly difficulties for farming activities can consume fruits that are grown in tropical regions leading to the balance between the consumption of meat and fiber. Secondly, this development is able to impulse bilateral trading activities between different countries. By way illustration, a number of nations tend to industrialize like Japan could exchange their manufacturing industrial products with other regions in which focus on agricultural like Vietnam, result in the global trend of specialization.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the aforementioned benefits, I ague that it will be a grievous mistake to disregard its pitfalls. One of its potential harms that prolong fruit longevity, especially that perishable agriculture products, preservatives are commonly used in food processing, which poses a risk to consumer’s health, as these additives may contain detrimental substances. In addition, another problem should be taken into account is that increasing heap of exotic food is disabling the food security and self-sufficiency which make nations heavily dependent on food supply.
In conclusion, it is undeniable fact that advantages of food from foreign countries, it will be a grave mistake to overlook intangible problems as discussed above.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61952861953 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12946978798 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643097643098 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9629515247 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.083333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288097803742 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930447124136 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548770308199 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156847090058 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612329339786 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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