In many countries,people wear more western-style clothes than their traditional clothes.Why?Is it a positive or negative development?
People of many different countries are wearing western style clothes rather than their traditional ones.some people disagree with this because of the fear of losing traditional clothes,however in my opinion this kind of clothes are important for indviduals.
To commence with,we are living in an fast changing world,so globalization is one of the main reason to urge people wearing this kind of western style clothes because people see and watch foreign styles and movies everywhere on TV or social media and this effect people’s outlook.
Secondly,nowadays people prefer appearance and price than quality,a good example for this traditional clothes look old and expensive for most people because they are handmade.
It is positive as people do not waste money for clothes as western style clothes can be bound at a cheap cost,so they can save their money.However some people may argue that their natsionalitie may lose its importance.
To conclude wearing western style clothes have no negative consequences for indviduals because globalization is entering every country and people tend to buy western style clothes in order to catch up with others and latest fashion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40217391304 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90963460506 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.9722114972 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.8 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463629985095 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267305235176 0.084324248473 317% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862876910215 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267305235176 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862876910215 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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