The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food
restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and
make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below illustrates an information how often people visited fast food restaurants in the USA from 2003 to 2013.
Overall, the proportion of people who had visited fast food restaurants evrery day, a few times a year and never were remained unchanged while the people who visited several times a week, once or twice a month showed fluctuation.
According to the bar chart, we can see, the people who visited to fast food restaurants every day and the people who visited never to the fast food restaurants were showed nearly the same amount under five persentage within three years while the people who visited to restaurants a few times a year showed between 10 and 15 percent.
The percentage of people who visited to fast food restaurants once a week and once or twise a month showed high point in given years over 30 percent and these people who visited to fast food restaurants several times a week showed fluctuation and between 15 and 20 percent in given years.
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put before the verb 'visited'.
Suggestion: never visited
...estaurants every day and the people who visited never to the fast food restaurants were showe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74269005848 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53787694686 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456140350877 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.329432527 43.030603864 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.75 112.824112599 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.75 22.9334400587 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266742357142 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21608604511 0.103423049105 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997777462894 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21608604511 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997777462894 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.2329268293 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.