In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?
The percentage of aged people in many countries is steadily increasing. This issue shows there are several positive impacts such as better quality of life and many people with more expertise.
The proportion explains that life quality provides a real effect on life expectancy which always increases. It is proof of a healthy consumption pattern applied in society. A lot of people have consumed a variety of healthy foods such as vegetables and meats to fulfill their nutritional needs. For example, after World War 2, the majority of Japanese had implemented healthy habits in order to maintain their population due to the war, which had reduced almost half of the population. The behavior continues to this day in Japan, making it the healthiest country in 2023.
The benefit of the trend also illustrates that elderly individuals have more skills so they obtain a job straightforwardly. Having more experience is one of the strong reasons why some companies still place aged people in crucial positions. Nowadays, great positions like supervisor or director in some machine manufacturers are occupied by experienced people who clearly have ages above 50 years old. Such experience is important to the company because it can control new engineers and provide solutions or alternative ideas to develop the company.
In conclusion, a rising portion of older people have advantages such as there are experienced individuals and society grasp healthy lifestyle. Therefore, the authorities should take this group into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39834024896 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98273008772 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655601659751 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2122278214 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.076923077 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299907127533 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914867932789 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710991216144 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171902907254 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072231094695 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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