The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Giving much stricter punishment to improve safety on the road is the only way for driving offenses. Safety on the road is a crucial thing for people because this can reduce the number of accidents and accelerate accessibility in the city.
There are a lot of accidents on the road and this condition really has negative effects on the people. Giving punishment must be held by the government to overcome this issue. The punishment has to have a deterrent effect on offenders. In my country, Indonesia, the government bravely gives stricter punishment to offenders if they cause big accidents on the road that make people injured or even die. The types of punishments are various such as being jailed for 20 years or even the death penalty. What is the consequence of this rule? The government has reduced the number of accidents since 2 years ago hitherto.
In addition, the rule regarding punishment is definitely making accessibility to be better. As an effect of this issue, good accessibility can improve economic society and give a comfortable mood to riders and drivers. For example, since this rule was applied in 2021, this situation was linear with the growth economic that increased reaching 25% in 2022. Therefore, this country became one of the best countries in the world with the best growth economic held by the International Monetary Fund organization in 2022.
If it is possible the government has to consider this issue. This is because there are considerable positive effects of this rule.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, regarding, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00793650794 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82692352189 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4197808652 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202467178673 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834111069309 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140161690044 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148477420732 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1540454107 0.056905535591 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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