In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse. What are the causes for this problem? What measures do you think should be taken to tackle the problem?
It is true that living standards in big cities are declining. There are many reasons for this, but this situation should be addressed by attracting locals in some practical ways.
There are two main reasons why living standard in big cities has been becoming worse. Firstly, overpopulation and migration of people from rural to urban areas are the major factors contributing to this phenomenon. Indeed, the fastest growth in population could put further strain on infrastructure and services in big cities and as a result, individuals usually could not afford basic facilities such as medical treatment, decent accommodation or cleaning drinking water. Secondly, due to hectic schedule and excessive workload, more and more people, particularly young people, do not have a chance to spend quality time with their family and friends. Therefore, it is easy to understand why citizens seem to becoming more stressful and fatigued today.
The government should take some measures to tackle this issue effectively. Firstly, focusing on the development of the countryside. By setting up business in rural areas, it would create more employment opportunities and encourage country-dwellers to stay in their hometown rather than moving to megacity for seeking jobs. Secondly, civil authority should improve the infrastructure of rural areas by widening roads, developing affordable accommodation to accommodate an ever-growing number of residents.
In sum, several factors lead to the decline in living standard in large cities. We should take effective steps, including developing countryside and improving rural area’s infrastructure to tackle this modern-day problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ming more stressful and fatigued today. The government should take some measures...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12091268702 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0912361374 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187889406094 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060200722532 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542316041119 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117547563015 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378180066588 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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