The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the advantages?
People have different views about social networking site is taking place of real interaction. I am opinion that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is clearly that social media brings several disadvantages. First of all, a new set of communication barriers has been unexpectedly created by the employment of social network. As a result, there is a greater number of people today has trend to interact with others through messages with icon showing their emotions. This makes misunderstanding between people in society or anyone who likely tend to hide behind the text. Secondly, with the outbreak of social media such as facebook and twitter, people are more potentially disconnected. Because everyone is approachable online and not demand for visiting friends and relatives to get updated of one another. This will lead to increase the number of people have to deal with loneliness in today’s widely connected world.
On the other hand, I believe that the merits outweigh the drawbacks. Firstly, media technologies lift up any geographical barriers when people are enabled to interact 24/7 with more people than before. For example, Facebook and Twitter have become the most popular that many people around the world can be connected by a click of the mouse. Old friends who lose contact for a long time can be linked on an international social network and exchange pleasantries. The second advantage is that social networking sites are powerful tools to push the flow of information faster. For instance, breaking news is up to the minute and available for free. So that keeping abreast of what happening around us has never been simpler.
In conclusion, I believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Because it helps people remove geographical distance and get breaking news by a fastest way through social media tools.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'trended'.
Suggestion: trended
...is a greater number of people today has trend to interact with others through message...
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Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...p to the minute and available for free. So that keeping abreast of what happening aroun...
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Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...hical distance and get breaking news by a fastest way through social media tools....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17275747508 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82934792055 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0075962313 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18913415602 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553495260979 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035440949465 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112871942445 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169914582569 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.