In many countries, school have severe problem with student behaviour. what do you think are the causes and what solution can u suggest.
School have a serious challenge with student behaviour in numerous nation. In accordance with this issue, this essay will explain contributing factors of the issue and also put forward a number of remedial measures in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the argument above, I do believe that there are several causative factors of this statement. It, first and foremost, is caused by the lack of love which those pupil obtained from their parents. Second but not less crucial, a majority of them, moreover, want to acquire a special feedback of teacher in school since they did not get it from their home. Last but not least, it is created by the inaccurate utilization of technology, since we knew that these days, an advanced technology had an enormous impact to all societies, including juveniles.
In accordance with the counter measures of these causes, there are various solutions that we are capable of applying to them. Every parent in their home, Firstly, need to render them more affections to their adolescents. Secondly, educator in school, additionally, has maximally to confer countless positive feedbacks for their student. Both teacher and guardian in their home, lastly, have to control and maintain the use of gadget which children used.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the tribulation that happened in school is able to be solved by numerous actions as I already wrote over. Thus, in order to minimize bad behaviour and resolve those difficulties in several states, we, as a part of society where all of these individuals belong, also have to monitor educator attitude to their learner and parent action to adolescents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
School have a serious challenge with student behavi...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this pupil' or 'those pupils'?
Suggestion: this pupil; those pupils
...st, is caused by the lack of love which those pupil obtained from their parents. Second but...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09157509158 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74187507856 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.04066741 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.833333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141555080171 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556692982012 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602214404746 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085633014654 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304901311768 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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