In many countries senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this isn’t justified. Do you agree or disagree?
it is argued that in some nations salary pakages of senior post of masses have more as compared to the workers, working under them and it is not a justified act. From my prospective, this is not a matter of slums of money, this is the matter of experience for particular job. so, I disagree with statement to certain extent. this essay intends to elaborate the both sides of view.
To commence with, the prime factor leading behind big salary packages of high post people is that, they have the experience of job and they do hard struggle to approach their targets. educational experience of that person is far mare than the other people having small post. To cite an example, a person, having digree of doctor have a good payment as compared to that, who has done only secondary study with arts steam.
However, some time, the masses have some knowledge about work with some educational study for a particular job,but first person have higher salary then second one. this is a directly cause of discrimation due to gender and relationship. In such cases, it is a matter of great concern and unjustice.
To conclude, different people follows various ways to get sauce ss in their life, in which ,obviously, they have done a lot of sacrifices. so, in that terms senior have the higher salary pakages due to their spirit and hard word, which enable them to reach their targets, with comparison of junior ones. By doing this, this is not a unjustified work, which is directly related to lesser knowledge and experience of opposite group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74626865672 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50852855811 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2062989799 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8461538462 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214307784828 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716551309659 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398476759674 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134594577103 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132419093895 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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