In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?
Across many nations, parents have the opportunity of selecting same-sex or mixed schools for their children. However, some argue that gender-oriented schools would have drawbacks affecting their future. This essay disagrees that single-sex schools would affect children differently. While these types undoubtedly allow the students to focus on their education, I believe that the curriculums would be more specifically be tailored.
In my opinion, pupils would be able to relax around other students of the same sex. Additionally, with the absence of the opposite genders, the pupils would be allowed to speak openly and honestly without any external pressures. For example, I am an example of myself. Having gone to a girls' school, I was able to share my opinions and viewpoints with my fellow classmates, not having to face the other sex. As a result, the sense of brotherhood or sisterhood nurtures within the premises, ensuring a positive impact.
As far as I am concerned, lessons taught could be stereotyped towards a particular gender. Furthermore, the syllabuses could be adjusted towards connecting each other based on their gender opinions. For instance, in an all girls' school, history could be taught in relation to heroines, allowing the children to discuss the topic. This allows the students to concentrate on a wider basis on their studies. A sense of belonging and unity could be put forward with this setup.
In conclusion, the point of having single-sex educational institutions should be encouraged to increase in number, along with the benefits of a better learning background and a feeling of being comfortable around the same variety of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: FELLOW_CLASSMATE[1]
Message: Use simply 'classmates'.
Suggestion: classmates
...hare my opinions and viewpoints with my fellow classmates, not having to face the other sex. As a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, honestly, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32830188679 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95230871277 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5909347714 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225028304138 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817528571215 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965642773919 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141722685002 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959596212466 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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