More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The extinction rate of many animal species is increasing at a faster pace, while some of them are listed as on the edge. While this phenomenon is caused by the major issue of destructing wild habitats, educating the public on the value of these breeds would be a viable solution.
The main cause of animal extinction is the over exploitation of resources with an increase in population. Furthermore, companies are encouraging deforestation for purposes of agriculture, mining, infrastructure, and factories which could result in forest clearances. As a result, the wild species would lose their habitats, eventually causing low demands for living and die. For example, research conducted by Oxford University in 2018 suggested that out of the 8 million existing, 1 million are in danger, with almost one-fifth of the Earth surface being degraded.
A possible solution to this decline in natural beauty would be the introduction of campaigns and societies. Additionally, societies that are built with a purpose could educate people and the government to save lives. Actions such as building zoos, separating land for animal survival, funds allocate towards animal healthcare would play a major role. Consequently, even the last endangered bodies would survive. For instance, the administration centers in Russia introduced new policies and legislation towards the protection of snow leopards.
In conclusion, the facilitating decline in wild species could be controlled by the unity of the public and higher authorities by slowly alleviating the damage caused to the living demands of the rare and endangered creatures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52822580645 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1416828366 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5434010002 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172405672811 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573675060295 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294800103986 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100219474134 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246871541793 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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