In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without
employment.
What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should
be done about it?
Unemployment is a serious economical issue in many developing countries.Every year,an enormous number of students are getting graduated from various universities around the world. But do all of them end up in jobs of their dreams? statistics shows that, many students who pass from universities are not able to qualify the requirements of job market . What can be the reasons?
Firstly, many students are taking a profession without their own interest. they pursue a graduation course either due to family pressure or due to financial restrictions. So once their studies are completed, they end up in a field which they dont adore. Secondly, in todays world, jobs are very volatile. A student completes a course in three-four years and by that time , demand of that job may have gone down drastically and thus make it difficult to get a suitable job. Finally, in many countries competition is very tough and the number of students who pass out every year is more than the actual requirement in job market.
Afore mentioned problem can be mitigated by giving counseling to students before they take up graduation courses in universities. Expert professionals can guide students in choosing a profession of their interest , provide alternatives and advice on various career paths. Government should provide for educational loans and scholarships to talented students to pursue a career of their choice. In this era of technology advancement, students should be agile enough to up-skill to new areas of interest and to specialize in niche areas of their respective fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20158102767 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03752572006 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6145235946 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162865959892 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635950699572 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610899759641 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111661629392 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280217854376 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.